Notes #2 Writing workshop (draft) (11/5)

A.      Item#1 (teacher #1): Dedication; Mr. Escalante gives up his summer vacation to teach in a locker room at the school when the temperature is  110 degrees.  Through his hard work and determination he drives himself to have a mild heart attack.  On top of that he comes back to school to teach when he should be at home resting and recuperating after his heart attack. He has given up his health to teach the students and that shows his dedication.
B.      Item#2: Inspiring; Mr. Escalante is inspiring in that he got all the students to give up their summer including Saturdays to come to summer school class in the 110 degree heat. Additionally he got the students to retake the AP exam after the district accused them of cheating.



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